these are looking very strong - the hand drawn elements are not 100% working yet - maybe need more detail. They look a little plonked on to the layouts too... Maybe you need to experiment a little more with different styles of illustration. Again re-search into early NYC hip hop flyers and borrow the styles from their. See you tomorrow at 9am Moor Street. Print some of these out so I can proof on train. Typographical wise they are appalling!!! the shapes of the type on the right hand side is rather ugly. Will discuss with you tomorrow. I think one huge push and you'll be there...
these are looking very strong - the hand drawn elements are not 100% working yet - maybe need more detail. They look a little plonked on to the layouts too... Maybe you need to experiment a little more with different styles of illustration. Again re-search into early NYC hip hop flyers and borrow the styles from their. See you tomorrow at 9am Moor Street. Print some of these out so I can proof on train. Typographical wise they are appalling!!! the shapes of the type on the right hand side is rather ugly. Will discuss with you tomorrow. I think one huge push and you'll be there...
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